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The Trouble With Jargon (with worksheet and answers)

2004.12.06 13:48 | English 영어 자료 | huangsy88

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THE TROUBLE WITH JARGON

CONSIDER these two passages - the first, from Albert Einstein's 'popular' account of relativity and subtitled, amazingly enough, A Clear Explanation That Anyone Can Understand, and the second from the French philosopher Jacques Derrida.

Einstein: 'Let us suppose... that we know the space-time course for any natural process whatsoever, as regards the manner in which it takes place in the Galilean domain relative to a Galilean body of reference K.

'By means of purely theoretical operations... we are then able to find how this known natural process appears, as seen from a reference body K which is accelerated relatively to K. But since a gravitational field exists with respect to this new body of reference K, our consideration also teaches us how the gravitational field influences the process studied.'

Derrida: 'The living present springs forth out of its non-identity with itself and from the possibility of a retentional trace. It is always already a trace.

'The trace cannot be thought out on the basis of a simple present whose life would be within itself; the self of the living present is primordially a trace. The trace is not an attribute; we cannot say that the self of the living present primordially is it.

 

'Being primordial must be thought on the basis of the trace, and not the reverse. This proto-writing is at work at the origin of sense. Sense, being temporal in nature... is never simply present; it is always already engaged in the movement of the trace, that is, in the order of signification.'

Question: Which of these two specimens is likely to be condemned as jargon?

The answer is obvious. Most people would assume Einstein's relativity theories are beyond their ken. They would readily concede his language is difficult because his subject is difficult.

Nobody would dream of describing his language as jargon, for we know its unfamiliarity is due to its highly technical nature. If we cannot understand it, we would assume it's our fault, not Einstein's.

Many, even academics, would resist approaching Derrida with a similar humility. His writings have been described as 'murky', 'turgid', 'baffling', 'obscure', 'notoriously difficult' - all epithets liberally hurled by the New York Times (NYT) in its obituary of the philosopher, who died in October at the age of 74.

The Times' unstated assumption was clear: Philosophers have no business using such technical language. If we cannot understand their language - 'retentional trace', 'proto-writing', 'signification' - it is because they are being intentionally obscure, not because we are ignorant.

Mr Derrida, the founder of a school of philosophy called Deconstruction, stands condemned as a jargon-ridden writer.

The NYT is not the only newspaper which makes such assumptions. I can't count the number of times I have heard colleagues in this newspaper dismiss the writings of some academic in the humanities as 'jargon'.

Come to think of it, I can't count the number of times I have heard academics dismiss the writings of other academics in the humanities as 'jargon'.

The assumption seems to be universal: People in the humanities ought to write transparent prose accessible to reasonably well-educated people.

The possibility that even the humanities can have specialised languages specific to themselves is discounted.

Geneticists can have such a language, neurologists can, physicists certainly, economists can write what would appear to be gibberish to most people, but not philosophers, historians, sociologists, political scientists or literary critics.

It is obvious why. All of us are, to some degree or another, philosopher manques, part-time historians, coffee-shop political scientists, dinner-table literary critics. It is not possible, however, to be a part-time physicist, geneticist or neurosurgeon.

We know that to be any of these, we have to undergo prolonged specialised training. We acknowledge there cannot be amateur opinions in physics or neurology, only expert opinions. So we readily accept the specialised languages of these disciplines for what they are - necessarily different from ordinary language.

When it comes to the humanities, however, we are not inclined to be so diffident. The professional philosopher or historian, we assume, is different from us only in degree, not kind.

The political scientist or sociologist, we like to believe, is merely someone who knows more than we do about matters that belong to the public realm.

It stands to reason therefore that their writings should be transparent and accessible. And if they aren't, they are 'jargon'.

It is an altogether convenient thesis. The truth, of course, is that what appears to be jargon is often an exact specialised language, as essential for producing and codifying knowledge in the humanities and the social sciences as are the specialised languages of the hard sciences.

As Harvard University's Ms Marjorie Garber wrote: 'The history of jargon is the history of ideas in the making.'

The sociologist who called a 'poor boy' an 'underprivileged pre-adolescent' (to use an example author George Orwell cited once) was guilty of pretentious, bad writing, but the sociologist who coined 'meritocracy' in the 1950s made a significant contribution to understanding industrialised societies.

Similarly, every strange formulation in the Derridean passage quoted above may seem like a ghastly carbuncle on the face of the English language. But to someone who has taken the trouble to study Derrida, each has a precise meaning and contributes to a significant new insight into language.

Whether one agrees with that insight, or thinks it is valuable, is a different matter, but dismissing the whole as 'jargon' is simply lazy.

Jargon, incidentally, comes from the Old French jargoun, meaning 'warbling of birds', and was borrowed by Middle English to mean 'twittering, chattering'.

I'm not so sure it wasn't the New York Times that was guilty of jargoun in so easily dismissing Derrida's works as murky and obscure.

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IMPORTANT CONCEPTS

  • Albert Einstein: 20th-century physicist who developed the special and general theories of relativity.

  • Relativity: Theory concerning time, space and the motion of objects, first proposed in 1905 by Einstein in his special theory of relativity.

  • Jacques Derrida: French philosopher and professor who created the school of criticism known as Deconstruction, in which texts are read and analysed to uncover the difference between structure and metaphysical essence.

  • Galilean: Relating to Galileo, the Italian astronomer and physicist who was the first to use a telescope to study the stars in 1610.

  • Harvard University: Founded in 1636, it is theoldest institution of higher learning in the United States. Seven US presidents were graduates of Harvard. Its faculties have produced 40 Nobel laureates.

  • George Orwell: British novelist and essayist, best remembered for his satirical political novels, Animal Farm and 1984.

  • Meritocracy: Government or society in which citizens who display superior achievement are rewarded with positions of leadership. In a meritocracy, all citizens have the opportunity to be recognised and advanced in proportion to their abilities and accomplishments.

  • Old French: The French language from the ninth to the early 16th century.

  • Middle English: The English language from about 1100 to 1500.

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    THE WORKSHEET


    IN TODAY'S piece, Mr Janadas Devan argues articulately that jargon is a useful tool for specialists in the various fields of learning.

    However, jargon is also frequently abused. You should avoid using jargon unless you are a specialist talking to other specialists. And you should never use jargon in the hope that it will make your writing more impressive.

    See if you can spot the jargon in the following tongue-in-cheek passage. Highlight words and phrases you think are jargon.

    Most of the jargon is from the field of management. Many of the examples in the passage have come into general use and can be considered cliches.

    Memo from the Boss

    Subject: the parameters of jargon Colleagues: We are, in my view, rapidly approaching the worst-case scenario imaginable - a situation in which the parameters of jargon know no bounds. There is so much jargon being used in the company, communication is being seriously impaired.

    At this juncture, the use of jargon must be addressed. Anecdotal information suggests the problem is so serious, a band-aid solution won't work. I am, therefore, forced to admit I am bearish on this issue.

    I believe I have made a compelling case for clamping down on jargon. We must be proactive. I for one will push for this. I don't know what your take on the situation is, but I am convinced we must set up a task force to examine this mushrooming problem.

    This will give us an overview and help us to focus on the problem so we can get a handle on it.

    I believe we are well positioned to effect meaningful change if we stay on target. In the long haul, there must be a paradigm shift so the major players will come on board.

    Let me share with you some of the strategic decisions we've already arrived at.

    First, we will order a complete re-think of the use of jargon, especially in memos. Second, we will seriously consider bringing in a hired gun to tackle the problem.

    These steps are a start, but I would greatly appreciate your input in this matter.

    Your feedback will help me see the situation in a wider context.

    Remember: Only you can be a catalyst for change. I feel good about this issue. I am confident that, going forward, you will cease to use jargon in your writing.

    I'm running out of arrows to fire. I urge you to help put out this brush fire of jargon. I hope you will buy into the idea that the use of jargon must stop.

    Let's all be good team players. A viable solution is in sight if significant rigour is applied. Thank you.

    The Boss

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  • ANSWERS

    1. worst-case scenario (worst situation)
    2. parameters (limits)
    3. at this juncture (at this time)
    4. addressed (given words on a topic which may have little or no meaning. In this context, to be dealt with)
    5. anecdotal informaion (scattered stories or reports)
    6. band-aid (quick temporary fix)
    7. bearish (asserting a belief that the situation will become worse)
    8. issue (problem, question)
    9. compelling case (persuasive argument)
    10. clamping down (reducing)
    11. proactive (take steps to prevent something bad from happening)
    12. push for (recommend)
    13. your take (your opinion)
    14. task force (group of employees given responsibility to research some aspect of a firm's business)
    15. mushrooming (growing quickly)
    16. overview (general description of topic whose goal is not clarity)
    17. focus (give a great deal of attention)
    18. get a handle (investigate and learn about something)
    19. well positioned (desired by customers. In this context, in a good position)
    20. on target (actual costs are close to projected costs and actual revenues close to projected revenues. In this context, sticking to the immediate goal)
    21. long haul (extended period of time)
    22. paradigm shift (major change in accepted point of view)
    23. major players (companies, unions or other participants)
    24. come on board (agree with what we're doing)
    25. share with you (give information for you alone)
    26. strategic decisions (major choices)
    27. re-think (review of one's position)
    28. hired gun (consultant believed to have expertise)
    29. input (opinions)
    30. feedback (also opinions)
    31. wider context (looking at other related topics)
    32. catalyst (a force that causes change)
    33. feel good (am optimistic)
    34. going forward (in the future)
    35. arrows to fire (points to mention)
    36. brush fire (situation out of control)
    37. buy into (agree with)
    38. team players (those who go along with policies and get along with others)
    39. viable (able to last for at least a while)
    40. significant rigour (non-trivial examination)

    Source : http://straitstimes.asia1.com.sg/sub/singapore/story/0,5562,288958,00.html?

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